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Happy beginnings, sad endings by *animedrawer1233:iconanimedrawer1233:





The picture above is a boy...
the main character is a girl!!! XD


I'm standing in the rain, it's pouring down, but I don't have an umbrella.
There's so much rain that I can't even see two-feet around me.
I walk around to find the school, it's useless.
The ground is slippery.
I panic, because I'm scared of tripping,
one second later I find myself on the cold, wet ground
next to what seems to be.... dog shit!?
Oh great this is my lucky day.
Let's review, on the cement ground, cold, shivering, anything that was dry five minutes ago is soaked, I tripped, my leg is burning with this intense feeling of needles in it,
my iPod is probably broken now.
I'm probably going to be late to school too.

I'm trying to hold back the tears, but it's not working.
As soon as I'm about to cry, I see this tall figure walking my way.
I panic, all of a sudden this blurred figure I see is clear, it's a boy my age,
tri-colored streaks in his hair,
all of them are my favorite colors.
Blue, Purple, and Black. He's drinking a Monster,
he chugs what's left of his drink
then throws it behind himself.

I yell in a jokingly way
"Hey, that's littering!"
He looks at me seriously, then smiles.
I see he has an umbrella.
I'm glad I forgot mine. Otherwise I would have never met this boy,
who has given me the happiest feeling,
just by seeing his face. He holds his hand out.
I pause and think if I should take his hand.
But, how can I resist, that beautiful smile.
I take his hand, which is incredibly warm, but has scars on it.
He helps me up, and he see's that I'm cold, and shivering,
and takes his coat off, and puts it around me.
I look up at the sky and I see the sun is coming out from under those black clouds.
The sun is so warming.
It stops raining, my skin feels so warm, and not just because the sun is out,
it's because that boy I'm standing next to is making me feel this way.

"What else could be better than this." I say.
As soon as I finished that sentence,
a rainbow appeared, and the puddles of water reflected colors of the rainbow,
it sparkled everywhere.
Wow, this is beautiful.
:iconanimedrawer1233:

Author's Comments

This is a page or two of a story I'm working on....

:iconbigheartplz:Next:[link]:iconbigheartplz:


I'm going to somehow turn this into a manga?

The girls name is Cree and the boys name is Lane

The main character is Cree, the girl. XD

The manga will be in color and yes that will take awhile DX

Comment on what you think! PLEASE!!!!!!!!

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:iconladymahayla:
I LOVE THIS STOORRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY!

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"what ever hurts the most makes you stronger!"
:iconanimedrawer1233:
Ohhhahah, why?

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Drawing hands is like snorting two pixie stix its complicated

Check out my gallery[link] It's Anime heaven

I'm writing a short story, a lot of people are addicted to it
you should get addicted too! [link]
:iconladymahayla:
its ssosooooooooo good!

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"what ever hurts the most makes you stronger!"
:iconanimedrawer1233:
Lolz, how much have you read so far?

--
Drawing hands is like snorting two pixie stix its complicated

Check out my gallery[link] It's Anime heaven

I'm writing a short story, a lot of people are addicted to it
you should get addicted too! [link]
:iconladymahayla:
just this chaptor so far

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"what ever hurts the most makes you stronger!"
:iconanimedrawer1233:
Oh, your going to shart yourself when you see the other chapters.
XD

--
Drawing hands is like snorting two pixie stix its complicated

Check out my gallery[link] It's Anime heaven

I'm writing a short story, a lot of people are addicted to it
you should get addicted too! [link]
:iconladymahayla:
good i love reading....i just sounded like such a dork XD

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"what ever hurts the most makes you stronger!"
:iconanimedrawer1233:
Lolz, it doesn't matter,
if you like reading read! XD

--
Drawing hands is like snorting two pixie stix its complicated

Check out my gallery[link] It's Anime heaven

I'm writing a short story, a lot of people are addicted to it
you should get addicted too! [link]
(1 Reply)
:icondoaberuko:
It sounds very cute, though the main character seems to have quite a defeatist attitude. What's the plot and plans for character development?

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Procrastinators of the world unite... tomorrow!
Bad Spellers of the world Untie!
A member of VCE (Victims of Cronic Ennui)
:iconanimedrawer1233:
What's a defeatist attitude?

Um, I'm not entirely sure on what's going to happen with this story
There is a lot of action I would say in the story, though.
And the characters will fall in love with a lot of people, of course
That's a must have XD:iconimhappyplz:
And honestly, it might have something to do with Heaven and Hell,
that's ironic since I'm atheist but this was made 2 years ago when I did believe in God, Heaven and Hell... oh well

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Drawing hands is like snorting two pixie stix its complicated

Check out my gallery[link] It's Anime heaven

I'm writing a short story, a lot of people are addicted to it
you should get addicted too! [link]

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